Sunday, July 11, 2010

MS KRISTI.PRACTICE 5-6

PRACTICE 5-

1-Narrowed topic:Over coming fears

Controlling idea:Over coming fears made me stronger

Topic sentence:Over coming fears is something that can change your life.

2-Narrowed topic:popular music

Controlling idea:modern day music is most popular

Topic sentence:there are money different types of music,Arabic is very popular today

3-Narrowed topic:Balancing work and play

Controlling idea:work and play are both very important

Topic sentence:It is very important to balance both work and play

PRACTICE 6:

PARAGRAPH 1:Animals can save life surprisingly

PARAGRAPH 2:The digital camera made photography much easier

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for doing your homework, Mohamed! Just remember to make your topic sentences a bit more detailed!

    :-) k

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