Thursday, June 3, 2010

homework,page 599

If I were the son of the old man in the hospital, I would feel greatful that somebody was kind enough to spend his time making my father feel wanted and loved in his final hours. I would also be upset because I was unable to be with my father on his deathbed and the red cross did not take the time to make sure that they had contacted the correct person. I would be upset about this because the red cross could have taken the time to contact both of us. My stronget emotion however would be grateful to the man who kept my father company during his final hours.

1 comment:

  1. This is a good response to the narrative that clearly describes your mixed feelings. You are only missing a pronoun in the final sentence. Otherwise, good job! 10/10

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