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1. Rich supporting details?
2. the first sentence makes me want to read on,becouse of the statement"smells of happiness it drew my attention,and made me curios.
3. The writer emphasize sound,and smell mainly.He uses detailed sentences "distant lawnmowers started up "
4. in my classmate
5. I wold suggest that the auther dose not make any changes to this piece .it is a very discriptive writing.
6. The ideas are not clear.