Monday, August 9, 2010

Final exam MS KRISTI

Hi I all ready did he exam under Ucompass
thank you .

MS KRSTI

I'm sorry I don't know whatI Did?
I cant take the final exam, can you help me how can I take it?

Sunday, August 8, 2010

TEN STEPS RELATIONSHIPS I

PRACTICE 1
1- ALSO
2- FIRST THING
3- INADITION
4- FIRST
5- THIRDLY
PRACTICE 2
1- WHEN
2- NEXT
3- AFTER
4- BEFORE
5- WHILE
PRACTICE 3
1-MAIN IDEA:#4
MAJOR DETAILS:
1-#3
2-#5
3-#8
PRACTICE 5
MAIN IDEA:#1
MAJOR DETAILS:
1-#2
2-#7
3-#10
PRACTICE 6
MAIN IDEA:#1
MAJOR DEATAILS:
1-#3
2-#4
3-#5
PRACTICE 7
1-B
2-A
3-A
4-B
5-B
6-A
7-A
8-B
9-A
10-B

Saturday, July 31, 2010

chapter4,MS kristi

Writing assignment 1

I was on my way to the store when suddenly I noticed a dog in the middle of the street. During my walk on the way to grab the dog, I heard a truck coming.So i quickly ran toward the dog, then I grabbed it and made my way back to the sidewalk.


Writing assignment 2

I was grocery shopping for dinner. At first I didn't really know the items that my wife had asked me to grab, especially because I had lost the list that she had given me. I attempted call her but her phone was not on at the time. I just grabbed the stuff that I rememberd that were on the list. I went home and met the fact that my wife had already gotten all those items, and above all I spent a lot of money on things we did not need.

Monday, July 19, 2010

MS KRISTI,ESSAY PARAGRAPH

The Nobel peace prize is a reward that a individual would win for maybe stopping a war or ending conflict somewhere and some how. President Barrack Obama was the winner of this reward not to long ago. This man in my eyes did not deserve to win this reward for a number of reasons, sending more troops the middle east, isn't withdrawing any troops, and the war on terror is still continuing.
In the past 2 years, approximately 47,000 U.S soldiers were sent to the middle east. A person would think that a man that won the Nobel peace prize wasn't responsible for this but the truth is that President Obama was indeed the one who signed the papers to send all of these troops over to the middle east to continue the war on terror.
This award should have been given to someone who has tried towithdraw troops from the middle east. President Obama did the opposite and decided to continue this war which has gotten no where in the past 5 years and has done nothing to benefit American citizens.
Obama is a great president in alot of different ways. Some might just believe that he has not been making the right decisions on this war and has done more things that have not been keeping the peace over in the middle east or here in our home land. The Nobel peace prize should not have been given to President Obama
This award is for those men who have did something that would benefit the world in general. President Obama should not have gotten this,he has sent more troops to the middle east to continue the war, isn't withdrawing any troops, and the war on terror is still continuing as we speak.r

Sunday, July 18, 2010

TEN STEPS,practices1,2,and3,

PRACTICE1:1-d
2-B
3-D
4-A
5-C
6-B
PRACTICE2:1-C
2-D
3-B
PRACTICE3:1-Topic:Reasons for lying
Implied main idea:there are money reasons for lying
2-Topic:Child
Implied main idea:money people think there are money ways thar it is to be only child
3-Topic The death penalty
Implied main idea:people have the death penalty for money reasons

Friday, July 16, 2010

MS KRISTI

Hello Ms. Kristi im writing you in regards to a paragraph i wrote about the 4th of July and i have not recieved a grade on it and i was wondering if you would be able to let me know what i recieved.


Thank you,

Mohamad Alomari.

QUIZ 3 MS KRISTI

  1. A
  2. C
  3. C
  4. B
  5. C
  6. C
  7. A
  8. A
  9. B
  10. C

AND I DID IT UNDER TEST EXAM TOO,

Sunday, July 11, 2010

MS KRISTI.PRACTICE 5-6

PRACTICE 5-

1-Narrowed topic:Over coming fears

Controlling idea:Over coming fears made me stronger

Topic sentence:Over coming fears is something that can change your life.

2-Narrowed topic:popular music

Controlling idea:modern day music is most popular

Topic sentence:there are money different types of music,Arabic is very popular today

3-Narrowed topic:Balancing work and play

Controlling idea:work and play are both very important

Topic sentence:It is very important to balance both work and play

PRACTICE 6:

PARAGRAPH 1:Animals can save life surprisingly

PARAGRAPH 2:The digital camera made photography much easier

Saturday, July 10, 2010

SUPPORTING DETAILS:Mastery Test 1,

A.Main idea:Divorce has serious negative consequences.

Major detail: 1. 2

Minor detail:A. 3

B. 4

Major detail:2. 5

Minor details:A. 6

B. 7

Major detail:3. 8

Minor details:A. 9

B. 10

B. THE ANSWERS,

7-B

8-A

9-C

10-sentence number 8. many farmers,....................

Friday, July 9, 2010

TEN STEPS,CHILD-REARING 125-128

  1. B
  2. A
  3. D
  4. A
  5. AND LONG INTERVIEWS
  6. A-1-PARAGRAPH 4

2-PARAGRAPH 5

B-THREE PARENTING STYLES

1-AUTHORITATIVE

2-AUTHORITARIAN

3-PERMISSIVE

DISCUSSION QUESTIONS

AUTHORITARIAN,YES,HE PUNISH ME FOR NOT BEING OBEDIENT.

Tuesday, July 6, 2010

4TH OF JULY MS KRISTI

The fourth of July is the day America claimed it's Independence from the British. This day is when the declaration of independence was signed by the founding fathers. When this day comes around every year it is part of the American culture to celebrate in various ways. Majority of Americans tend to barbecue and watch the fire works that are going on all over. This day is also a day to be grateful for the country that you live in and just to show a bit of patriotic spirit.

TEN STEPS,THE SCHOLARSHIP LACKET343

  1. D
  2. C
  3. B
  4. A
  5. D
  6. C
  7. C
  8. B
  9. C
  10. C

DISCUSSIION QUETIONS:3.

I have many friends that have been discriminated against just because of their ethnicity. This is completely wrong to not like someone just because of their nationality or the color of their skin. I think people should get to know each other before judging them.

Sunday, July 4, 2010

HW MS ROSEMARY RENIEWS

  1. TEST 1-SPECIFIC,SPECEFIC

2-TRUE

3-MAJOR DETAIL,MINOR DETAIL

4-MAP

5-SUMMARIZE

TEST 2 Main idea:several factors............

Major detail 1- 2

Mainor details a- 3

b- 4

Major detail 2- 5

Minor details a- 6

b- 7

Major detail 3- 8

Minor details a- 9

b- 10

TEST 2 B 1- C

2- C

3-

TEST 3 A : Main idea:Serious depression , has .....

1- 3

2-4

3-5

4-6

TEST 3 B Mian idea #1

Major details # 1=2

#2=4

Friday, July 2, 2010

HW,MS 4TH OF JULY,

First of all, Fourth of July is a celebration in The United States OF America,
in the 4TH of July every one is celebrate,because this is independents Day,
Imean We can say United State is free from great brition, And We always celebrate in 4th of July,Me and my family are going to the beach,and to the Zoo in Ohio State.
IF We ask any one WHO celebrates in the 4TH of July ? the answer is U.S.A.

Tuesday, June 29, 2010

THE TEN STEPS

PRACTICE 4-Study Notes- Passive listening occuse when there are 2 or more people but only one speaker.

Example-Student miss understands teacher because the teacher would not answer any of the students questions.

PRACTICE 4 B-Self-serving bias- To blame something/someone other than your self for an action or event that has occured.

Example-A person fails a test, you might say they should have studied harder, you fail a test and say i dont understand why i failed.

THE 10 STEPS 117-119

PRACTICE 3, A -C
B -B


PRACTICE 4, A-

summarizing,HW,PAGES 115-116,TEN STEPS

Summarizing in my own words is grabbing the main ideas from a writing. This means not focusing on the details of the paragraph and just getting the message the writer is trying to get through.

Sunday, June 27, 2010

THE TEN STEPS PAGE 114.

Induostrialized dairy farming from old-fashioned dairy farming in two basic respects.
Major detail, First of all,tere is an immense saving of labor in industrial farming .
minor detail, Indestrial farms have milking machines installed on a huge carousel.
Major detail,The second major difference is the higher milk output per cow on indostrial.
minor detail,The average American cow gives 7.5 times more milk then dose the average cow in Brazil.

The Ten steps Pages 113-114,

There ara four strategies for starting conversatoins with strangers.
The first major detail,One approach is to introduce yourself giving your name and asking the name of the other person.
The minor detail,Hi Iam shelby.And who are you?
The second major detail, Asecond approoach is to refer to the physical setting in a quetion.
The minor details, You might,for example ,make such a comment as,"This is awful weather for a game,isnt it?

Saturday, June 26, 2010

The Best place paragraphs,

There is a place where freedom is ok, and different ethnesities get alone well. This place is the United States of America. This to me is the best place in the world for many reasons. Some of the main reasons would be the cities, the people, and the life style.
The cities in america are some of the most famous, for example, we have chicago, New york city, Detroit, Miami, and plenty of other famous cites. These are some of the most beautiful places i have ever seen and these cities contain some of the biggest biuldings there are. The empire state biulding, which lyes in New york is almost above the clouds. This to me is symbolic of success and progress. In these beautiful cities and biuldings are some of the nicest and intelligent people a person will ever meet.
In many 3rd world countries, people are forced into a certain life style and forced to believe somthing that they might not agree with. In America, the whole idea of that has been abolished and people are to do and think what ever they like as long as it does not interfere with any one elses rights and beliefs or does not break any of the neccessary law that exist in this country. This makes the people here more understanding and much more polite. Its almost life everyone is looking out for each other and this makes me feel right where i belong.
One of the best things in this country would be the life style here. It is a beautiful thing here because it can be what ever the individual makes it. If a person would like to follow there religion then they are free to do that, or if someone would like to have a party at there home, they are also free to do that. With this life style you can fit in where ever you'd like and will always have people that are similar to you and people that are very different from you.
In the end, majority of people will say that America is one of the best places in the world not only because of the cities, people, and the life style, but also because of what this country stands for. Its a place for everyone and anyone. So next time some one questions this, just give them some facts.

Wednesday, June 23, 2010

HW.VOCABULARY, MS KRISTI,

1- University- an institution of learning at the highest level

  • My brother was accepted to the University of Michigan

2-Interrogate-to question someone

  • The police officer was interrogating me all night.

3-Study- to observe something or someone

  • I was studying before the test had begun.

4-Bottle- portable container for liquids.

  • I have a bottle full of iced tea.

5- Office- A room for business organization

  • Her office is next to mine.

Monday, June 21, 2010

HW,PAGE 16 MS KRISTI,

I would like to love five things in my life,studying,sport like a soccer,fishing,or swimming,and traveling. I like traveling to know a lot of nice places in the World,and I want to know some culture, I like fishing in the summer time to make a lot of fun with my friends,and I like to drive the boat.

Sunday, June 20, 2010

My mistaks.Ms kristi,

some of my mistakes to Ms Kristi were commas,and some time
when we have homework ,Ido homework level 6 too,like the five paragraphs.

page 18-19 EVERGREEN

  1. Rich supporting details?
  2. the first sentence makes me want to read on,becouse of the statement"smells of happiness it drew my attention,and made me curios.
  3. The writer emphasize sound,and smell mainly.He uses detailed sentences "distant lawnmowers started up "
  4. in my classmate
  5. I wold suggest that the auther dose not make any changes to this piece .it is a very discriptive writing.
  6. The ideas are not clear.

Wednesday, June 16, 2010

Test 1,2,3,pages 91-96

A.1-P.S.S.S
2-S.P.S.S
3-S.S.S.P

B.1-SD.T.SD.MI
2-T.SD.MI.SD

Test 2,
A.1-S.S.P.S
2-S.S.S.P
3-S.S.S.SP

B.1-SD.SD.T.MI
2-MI.T.SD.SD

Test3,
1- 1
2- 2
3- 6
4- 1
5- 2

main ideas,test A Ms Rosemary

  1. 2
  2. 1
  3. 7
  4. 1
  5. 3

Thursday, June 10, 2010

Wednesday, June 9, 2010

5 paragraphs

I enjoy many things about my life very much. I have a wife and 3 kids I love very much. I manage a resteraunt at Wayne State University. I am part owner of a gas station in California that my brother runs and operates. But the thing I enjoy doing most, in my spare time, is playing soccer.
My wife and I got married 2 years ago in Yemen. Although we were engaged before that time, we wanted to wait until we would be financially stable enough to move to America. Our wedding was on a beautiful day in June. Our honeymoon lasted that entire summer and our marriage still feels as good as the day we got married. We have 2 boys and 1 girl and are very happy.
I started working at La Pita Dearborn when i first came to America. I began as a busboy and did that for 60 hours a week every week. When the owners decided to open another resteraunt on Wayne State's Campus I was asked to go there and work. I worked there for 2 years and began to slowly but surely get fed up with my boss, because I did most of his work for him and was not compensated for all the extra work. When the owners became fed up witrh my boss they decided they wanted me to be the manager and releive him of his job. I have been manager for 6 months and business is as good as ever.
I have always looked up to my brother because of his business sense. When he offered me the chance to be business partners with him i couldn't refuse. We opened a gas station in California near the bay area. I plan on moving to the bay area soon so I can play more of a role in the operating of the gas station. Then if I am successful with this one I hope to open another one.
Ever since I was a little boy I have always loved the game of soccer. I used to spend hours playing with my family. As I got older I began to enjoy watching soccer both on t.v. and in person. I have attended many professional soccer games, however nothing compares to the World Cup. I look forward to watching it this summer and I think Italy is going to win.

Thursday, June 3, 2010

homework,page 599

If I were the son of the old man in the hospital, I would feel greatful that somebody was kind enough to spend his time making my father feel wanted and loved in his final hours. I would also be upset because I was unable to be with my father on his deathbed and the red cross did not take the time to make sure that they had contacted the correct person. I would be upset about this because the red cross could have taken the time to contact both of us. My stronget emotion however would be grateful to the man who kept my father company during his final hours.

homework,ten steps,

  1. B
  2. D
  3. D
  4. B
  5. A
  6. A
  7. C
  8. D
  9. D
  10. C.

Monday, May 31, 2010

to the Editor,

To the Editor:
sensationalist reporting is harmful to all people invlved and
has no place in our society.
my son and I were an ordinary life before July 27.
my son was the security guard at the centennial Olmpic park.
He dosnt did any thing wrong ,but he helping to clear people from the area.

The School advanages,

  • you will meet people from adifferent country,you will be able to know more cultures, more habbits.
  • you have to orginize your time between work, and School.
  • make sure looking for School convenient to your home or work.

my favorite place,

My favorite place is Yemen , I love to live over there
there are too mony beautiful cities, like old Sanna the capital of Yemen
or Aden City .

my introduction,

Hello,
my name is mohamed .I am from Yemen,
Iam merried, and I have kids.
Iam working,and I have a car,
Icame to the U.S.A for better job.

5 WORDS,

  1. In the first time I traveled I felt really depressed.
  2. In my coutry people never leave tips.
  3. The first time I came here someone said leave me alone.
  4. The problem to hate study is Iam workig full time.
  5. I love to be the manager of lapita fresh.

Thursday, May 20, 2010

about my self

my name is Mohamed Alomari
Iam from Yemen.
I love U.S and I will life here for good
with my family, by the way Iam working, and
I love my job.

NEWS

WASHINGTON-National intelligence Director Dennis Blair said
Thursday he is resigning, ending a tumultuous 16-month tenures
marked by intelligence failures and turf wars among the country's spy
agencies.